Michael, it sounds like you have a firm grasp of the subject matter. But no one can understand what you're saying with those convoluted, multi-clause sentences. If you would just keep your language simple and stay on topic, your reviews would be very good. But right now, they're impenetrable.
Michael, it sounds like you have a firm grasp of the subject matter. But no one can understand what you're saying with those convoluted, multi-clause sentences. If you would just keep your language simple and stay on topic, your reviews would be very good. But right now, they're impenetrable.